This is a really exciting story opening Clea! I’m particularly impressed that you remembered one of our words from this week to include – spontaneously.
I agree with Miss Winser – I love the vocabulary choices in this story opening. I also like the balance between description and dialogue – well done Clea.
This is a really exciting story opening Clea! I’m particularly impressed that you remembered one of our words from this week to include – spontaneously.
I agree with Miss Winser – I love the vocabulary choices in this story opening. I also like the balance between description and dialogue – well done Clea.
Excellent paragraph
This is a great STORY! And I didnt know what spontaneously was. Then I looked it up in the Dictionary
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This is a Amazing STORY.And I didnt know what Spontaneously means .Then I looked it up in the Dictionary
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THIS IS GREAT
I like your story Clear and i think you are a exellent writer.