What an interesting start to a story Paris – I wish I could talk to pets! Just one thing to make it even better – don’t forget your speech marks! This makes it easier for your reader to see who is speaking and what they are saying.
Thank you Mr Scott
It is a very good piece of writing Paris well done
I like the descriptive vocabulary
What was the porpose of her talking to animals?
Paris I like that your uesing ajective also your story starter it’s so nice
PARIS I LIKE YOUR STORY BUT YOU NEED SPEECH MARKS SO IT BE’S ESIAR FOR YOU
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What an interesting start to a story Paris – I wish I could talk to pets! Just one thing to make it even better – don’t forget your speech marks! This makes it easier for your reader to see who is speaking and what they are saying.
Thank you Mr Scott
It is a very good piece of writing Paris well done
I like the descriptive vocabulary
What was the porpose of her talking to animals?
Paris I like that your uesing ajective also your story starter it’s so nice
PARIS I LIKE YOUR STORY BUT YOU NEED SPEECH MARKS SO IT BE’S ESIAR FOR YOU