Wow, I loved how it was about school!
I really like how you have compared the headteacher’s white hair to snow! It paints a very clear picture in my head. Don’t forget those capital letters at the beginning of your sentences though!
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Wow, I loved how it was about school!
I really like how you have compared the headteacher’s white hair to snow! It paints a very clear picture in my head. Don’t forget those capital letters at the beginning of your sentences though!