Great description Kylessa – I can really picture you there. I love the imagery you have used. Do you stay there for a few days over the Christmas holidays? It sounds like a great place to have a family get together!
Your work is great,especially the description you’ve put in and you’ve also talked about spending time with your family on christmas!The only thing you need to remember is to put a “I” as a capital letter but other than that your work is great!
Great description Kylessa – I can really picture you there. I love the imagery you have used. Do you stay there for a few days over the Christmas holidays? It sounds like a great place to have a family get together!
I really like the way you used good words to describe the words such as the mouthwatering grass.
Your work is great,especially the description you’ve put in and you’ve also talked about spending time with your family on christmas!The only thing you need to remember is to put a “I” as a capital letter but other than that your work is great!