I like the way you used lots of adejectives and similes.
Well done.I hope you tell me the rest of your story.
What is your favourite part of the story?
I’m lucky enough to be able to read your Creative Writing every week Zaina – it’s great that everyone else is able to read it too now! I’m sure everyone would like to hear what happens next – maybe I could photocopy your favourite stories for you to finish blogging them when you get home? Let me know!
This story is packed with some great similies! I wonder if you’ll tell us the ending to your story.
I read this story in your book and you include some great detail, description and humour Zaina. It’s a long story to write up in a blog!
thank you for the nice comment!
I like the way you used lots of adejectives and similes.
Well done.I hope you tell me the rest of your story.
What is your favourite part of the story?
thanks sneha my favorite part is when they save the day from their uncle killing their father
Your welcome remember for capital letters and full stops.
I’m lucky enough to be able to read your Creative Writing every week Zaina – it’s great that everyone else is able to read it too now! I’m sure everyone would like to hear what happens next – maybe I could photocopy your favourite stories for you to finish blogging them when you get home? Let me know!
Mr Scott
She is a very good writer.